Tell me what you think of this rebuilt structure deck?

Ahhh the rock structure deck, well nice interpretation but way to heavy. Rule #1 never have that many traps unless your entire deck bes off it. #2 try and keep limit down to 40 cards, for maximum performance. #3 when all else fails, the backup plan is your friend, if you base to much on one strategy, chances are that plan will get foiled, so you need cards for emergancy purposes such as a couple lightning vortex and a heavy storm, you always have to be ready for an opponents next move..if you wnt me to rebuild this deck for you, feel free to email me at any time